INFO5990 Week 5 Tutorial Summary
INFO5990 Week 5 Tutorial Summary
Part A — 7Cs of Communication
原句
“Hey, project’s late, not sure when it’ll be done. Will let you know.”
改写后
The project is currently behind schedule because some development issues are still being resolved. At this stage, we expect it to be completed by next Wednesday, although this may change depending on testing results. I will provide a confirmed update by Friday.
说明
这句话原本的问题是太随意,也不够清楚。改写以后,信息更完整,语气也更专业。新的表达说明了项目为什么延期、预计什么时候完成,以及下一次更新时间是什么时候。这样更符合 7Cs of Communication 的要求,也就是 clear、concise、complete 和 courteous。